This is My Little Working Thesis

So far, this thesis is something of a comparison claim, but I'm not really happy with it yet. Comparison is my default type of thesis, and I don't want it to be that way, so this is really still in the works. And I'm not even sure this is what I want to write about, so stay tuned for more.

Working thesis: 

Morrie Schwartz's life philosophies of responsibility, kindness, and childlike love are amplified and proven correct when they're applied to Alice. Her careless, childish behaviors are the antithesis of Morrie's behavior, which make his theories more relevant and tangible by comparison, since she's such a poor example of them.

I've posted this on Facebook, and I'm planning to continue to circulate it there and ask a couple friends for specific responses to get some good feedback so I can come up with a better thesis that I actually want to write about.