tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2854424785114020340.post1473355203468081090..comments2018-11-16T04:30:19.592-07:00Comments on Literary Wonderland: Loss of Innocence and Changing IdentityGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2854424785114020340.post-43005140008591843442014-03-13T21:29:25.723-06:002014-03-13T21:29:25.723-06:00I really like this concept. I agree with Annalee&#...I really like this concept. I agree with Annalee's suggestion that you should discuss how finding one's identity leads to a loss of innocence. It will give your paper a narrower focus and a strong central contention. There is a book by Birgitte Soland entitled "Becoming Modern: Young Women and the Reconstruction of Womanhood in the 1920s" that will help you contextualize the evolving gender roles in "The Sun Also Rises." Lauren Alstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03116038204146433884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2854424785114020340.post-51502182851027626192014-03-12T22:20:25.404-06:002014-03-12T22:20:25.404-06:00That is a great insight! Thank you for the idea. I...That is a great insight! Thank you for the idea. I think that will open up the spectrum of my paper as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08830815865203976824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2854424785114020340.post-60957604875119480942014-03-12T16:34:35.772-06:002014-03-12T16:34:35.772-06:00What a cool way to connect Alice and The Sun also ...What a cool way to connect Alice and The Sun also Rises! I found this actually super helpful, since I've had no idea how to successfully do so. But your working thesis seems to be missing that "loss of innocence" aspect to both of them that you mentioned before. Discussing how the two books show (maybe different takes?) how finding ones identity results in the loss of innocence, would give your essay more depth. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16017481339439458981noreply@blogger.com